


happiness comes and goes
and so would you
you were never there when i needed you most
i felt like a garden that just needed care
but you never even knew it was there
i would dance in the rain
but you would just complain that it came
you never appreciated anything you had
you would just wish for what you didn’t
……….
would i ever be enough?
i gave you everything i had
and you’d just call me a disappointment
others saw me as a bright colors
but you saw me as darkness
Jeez your rhymes are gorgeous, but still make perfect sense. You aren’t using some abstract sentence just because the word fits. This is really incredible.
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thank you so much that really means a lot
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“I would dance in the rain but you would just complain”
The effortless way you rhyme is beautiful
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